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Teres ([personal profile] teres) wrote 2025-01-22 05:15 pm (UTC)

In my defense, Seneschal is usually a single person's title, not the name of a collective group. For that matter, the term used for the entire hierarchy of the Church is 'the hierarchy', 'the Church hierarchy', or 'the bishops'. Why are they using a singular title?

SCSF: I was just thinking about that myself! The name "Seneschal" feels weird in any case; I guess that it might work if Artor was the king and Achar the household... but that does not make much sense. "The Stewards" would carry much the same meaning, but make more sense.

I meant that Ogden should just say that he has no idea how they're going to find Axis' father. ('The prophecy works in mysterious ways' is not a plan.)

Ah, that makes more sense! This bit blurred together quite a bit, so I did not exactly know what you meant. And yes, he really should admit he does not know, and mabye even ask Axis for tips (if only because he is more likely to know which people to contact to get information).

The mind-tampering in my spitefic is partly the Sentinels, partly long-term exposure to Axis since, well, Axis isn't really a friendly person.

Yes, that would do it, too... and since he has stuck with Axis for so long, I would think that admitting he should have left is no easy thing to do even without outside influence.


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